Eternity

For a 60 words or less story contest

            “Give me a kiss and I’ll give you all of eternity” said the angel and so the mortal did. The angel fell from her place in heaven to be with him but the mortal turned away in anger for the angel did not give him eternity.

 

            She did, just in a different way from what he expected. Both fools.

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on winning the 60-words-or-less contest!

[Frances O'Neill]

Marvelous! I just like the way you strung it.

[Johnny Westbrook]

it feels more like a scene, wouldn't mind reading more if you ever add to it.