liberation of the soul

liberation of the soul

A Poem by ruth
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the one time i walked 11 miles around the city

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from afternoon to night,

feet shuffling on old sidewalks.

 

through the forest and past the bushes,

the shining sun beat down on the leaves.

 

a feeling of release,

happiness,

freedom?

 

the carefree life was nice--

for a few hours.

© 2017 ruth


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I have same experience like you. Walk can give you freedom and,strong feelings of balance.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I have felt that once, walking through NYC By myself one morning. Well done, you've capture that elusive feeling perfectly.

Posted 6 Years Ago


:0 * claps * this is really nice! I


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your message has changed and the approach you now take seems suited to you
nice work very nice indeed

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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