Pinstripe Uprising

Stock straight

pinstripe executives

rise up

on elevators

even straighter

than their suits

or the skyscrapers

lining the avenue

and overlook

the parallels

of the city grid

from on high.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yeah, the rich rise, while the poor are kept in the basement...

funny though...even with the universal theme in this ...about suits in general...i was thinking pinstripes, my Yankees...their money and execs...and the five story apartment we lived in from which we could see the lights in the sky when the yanks had night games.

[rutherford]

Thanks Jacob...appreciate your steadfast reviews. I woke up with an image in my head of pinstripe suits in elevators and I was trying to portray a theme of vertical lines -- pinstripes, elevators, skyscrapers and avenues.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and you did that well...i just related to it in my own way..but yes, you achieved!