always

I wonder if this will always be here,
To remind me of what I did,
While I was hanging there,
Waiting for the your bid.

I knew you were never coming,
I never should have counted on you,
You just get me crying,
But this isn't new.

I never thought I'd have to say,
It's all a lie,
So I'm saying this today,
Goodbye

Reviews

[Gianna Perry]

All I can say it keep writing poetry. Fantastic job.

[Mike O'Sean]

Nice poem here. Reminds me a bit of song lyrics. Rhythm's not bad either. Try to sophisticate your word choice to make it more poetic.

[February Kapusniak]

ya but no one will unlock the rest of this poem without the key maybe it'll be relieved out soon but there's so much more than that going on 4 me.

[Alex Thomas]

Excellent verse. I had no idea that you could write such a poem. With everything that is going on, I can feel your pain and I'm sorry that you were dragged in. I've tried to repair the damages, but this is one diddle that can't be undone. So to you, Kasey Jones, Kirbetsy, Rosalyn Marie, I am remorseful that I began this awful mess.