Untitled

You caught me off guard.

 Now I am running in circles.

 I cant find a place to land, clouds towering over me like mountains.

 Soaring around, looking for my friends.

 Realizing I lost them, trying to find a way.

 You need some one by your side, some one to love, something to hold on to.

 Flying across the world, looking, searching for love in the smallest places, forgetting to look at the big picture.

 You were right in front of me the whole time, as we stand in silence, waiting.

 The sky closing in, feeling like the world is going to end, I realize you were there all along,

 through all the years I looked past you when I should have been looking right in front of me.

 Hearing you, finally getting that you were the one I was looking for all along.

 Holding each other tight, feeling so right.

Looking back at my life, reading between the lines.

 I missed so much, lost it all, 'till I found you waiting for me-to figure it out.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Rockebah]

I think its lovely. Just sweet and spoken from the heart.

[Shadows of Sight]

What a true set of words. I agree that we always find it right near by, when we actually take time to look.

Great Write!
Nature's Essence

[.:LiSa!:.]

i rly like this rach like a lot its rly good

[Brie]

very nice! i think it would make a great song! sorry, i don't have any names for ya. :)

[Ben Walton]

I don't think this needs a title. "untitled" is very fitting.

i really enjoyed it. It was a mess of imagery and emotions and at the end somehow, everything came back together and was fantastic.

[Str8jacket]

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I think it was great and would probably make a great song.

[Rachael]

Any ideas for a title?
I cant think of a fitting one.

[-!katie!-]

katie like (:

katie like a lot (: