One Word

One Word

A Poem by Rachael

Sometimes all it takes is one word to make one believe in the make believe.

And maybe it is that one word that spreads across to all the non-believers and forces them to believe.

It could be a new world if everyone would believe in something they once never did and spread the joy that came along with it.

 

© 2010 Rachael


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Love it! But it seems more like a statement than a poem to me. Maybe if you tried breaking it up a bit into stanzas and whatnot? I love how deep this is without being super duper long, but at the same time it's also simple. Do you know what I mean? Me neither. I'll stop talking now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is so true..it only takes one word..crossing millions and millions

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your wisdom is supernatural and your optimism is contagious.
It's sad how difficult it is to live such a life of simplicity. We'd
rather hold on to unnecessary hostility.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2010
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