Blue Angel

Blue Angel

A Poem by Sabbath_Nikole
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Mythical Girls # 7

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I'm exhuasted, drained, running on empty

Wearing a path in the floor

 

Thinking of all these things

These things that I own

 

Wondering how

Thinking why?

But I never seem to make it

Much past that

Beyond all the questions

 

I feel myself spiraling down

Sitting like this

With my head against the dead wood table

 

Looking from this angle

Perusing my life

Debating oh what do I do?

With this life

 

Wondering if I'll make it

Wondering if I'll break it

In my time

 

Dreaming up how

Thinking of now

What do my words mean to you?

 

What dreams will I share with you?

Oh what do I do?

If you come right through

Oh what will I do

With my angel dressed in blue?

© 2010 Sabbath_Nikole


Author's Note

Sabbath_Nikole
Original 2005

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The poem is a maelstrom of emotion. You have such a skill of using common language to convey your feelings. It seems to have just come out without through. that makes it come across as genuine and captures the readers mind as you earn their trust. Sweet work. It's difficult to speak candidly with such an impact.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really like this it is very relateable. I feel like I've lived in this emotion while I've been in pain. You did a beautiful job it had a nice flow :) 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it, I like the way it flows and it's well just amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem is a maelstrom of emotion. You have such a skill of using common language to convey your feelings. It seems to have just come out without through. that makes it come across as genuine and captures the readers mind as you earn their trust. Sweet work. It's difficult to speak candidly with such an impact.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm TOTALLY digging these 2005 poems!!! They're fiery n' feisty li'l fuckers! Love the last verse, containing questions n' that killer final line, to the MAX! ㋡

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sabbath_Nikole

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I am a thinker, in some ways Im considered an adult. I have a passion for some things that could rival the suns heat. Im not just another face in the crowd. Im a sister to two, and a cousin and godmot.. more..

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