Lost

When you think you have got it

the meaning of life

Wait, there is more to it

then just making up your mind.

Yes its hard,

my heart rolled and kicked, sits 

On a piece of rock

Till its numb, yeah my heart is numb.

It's not easy to be happy by

listening to your favourite song

Your emptiness can't be filled
surrounded by people all day long

It gets lonelier walking on your chosen path

the seasons betray you,the sun looks so dark

The breeze of spring slaps your face

the cold chills feel so warm.

Yes, it is a strange world out there.

Reviews

[saksham agrawal]

wohh!! its really good...great work..!!

[sadiaAleem]

Thank you very much.

[Lea Walker]

I love the third stanza. Great poem.

[sadiaAleem]

Thanks a lot!!

[ScoobyDooby]

the first stanza is my favorite. it feels like youre only touching the surface of a subject that can be deep. i also like the layout of the poem. over all this is a nice poem, good job!

[ProfessorPadilla]

I found your piece very interesting. It reminds me of a few days in my past. I can tell you wrote from your heart on this piece. Great Job sadiaAleem!