Winter evening

The fading light of evening comes

And seeps through every crevice

It casts warm shadows in cold rooms

And enters without notice

Dusky rays of dimming light

Precede the night descending

Then stillness comes announcing

That the sleeping day is ending.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Winter is my favorite season of all. Such an eloquent delivery to your lines...I could feel the warmth seeping through!

[Sadie]

Such inspiring comments, thank you:)

[LylaCrystal]

I love how you describe the winter evening. Thanks a lot for delighting us with this poem

[Sadie]

Very grateful for your kind comments:) Would you like to read my latest poem 'The Window'?

[Chris A Jones]

The imagery is well defined, the poem is beautiful in the simplest way. Thanks for sharing.

[Sadie]

So kind. Thank you:)

[Relic]

This is a pleasure to read.

[Sadie]

So kind of you to say so! Many thanks:)

[Kathryn Smith]

Welcome Sadie! I love the imagery. Well done! Looking forward to more work from you. :) x
Sounds like a winter evening to me..you perfectly summed it up. I'm ready for summer.

[Sadie]

Hi, thanks so much for your review. It motivates me to write more:)

[Tate Viviano]

Very nice, I love the imagery.

[Sadie]

Many thanks for taking the time to read my poem and for your encouraging words:)