Silence

Unseen, unheard and buried so deeply

A pearl in the earth unrevealed

Silence emerging, so pure and completely

as each whisper and sound is sealed

Reviews

[Zee Norton-Williams]

I don't know anything about you but I do love this and I know a lot of writers are talking about themselves in their work (My self included). This to me says that you feel invisible to those around you and that you've got so much beauty and potential that know one see's it but you (that's not meant to make you sound big headed it's good you see it) and that every word you say is slowly ripped away as if there was nothing said.

Such a small poem; Yet it say's so much!

Please do tell me if I'm wrong but either way it's an amazing piece. (I wish I could have wrote it! :) )

[Sadie]

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. You have frightening insight! You may well be right, you know, Zea:) Much of what you've said rings true....

[Zee Norton-Williams]

It's fine and i know it so well cuz i've been there since i was 13 x

[Bacchus]

your poems have a gentle depth about them
intriguing and almost hypnotizing
looking forward to reading more

[Sadie]

What a lovely comment, thank you:)

[Amber Rose Warner]

I love the symbolism of being invisible, I feel that too!

[Sadie]

Thanks, Amber:)

[Tate Viviano]

The words unsiad between people is often buried deep until they erupt like a volcano. What will it take for people to break the silence? I'm unsure but what I do kow is that this poem in it's imagery have left a silence in me pondering these things. Great Job as Awlays!! Keep it up!

[Sadie]

Thank you, Tate:)

[Chris A Jones]

Silence is golden. Nicely written and to the point. Thanks for sharing.

[Sadie]

I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and for your helpful kind comments:)