Only You

When I walk into a crowded room

the only face I see is yours

everything else is a blur

 

When I enter into a room of people

I search for your face

everything else dissapears

 

It's amazing to see so many people

but not notice a single one

they don't exist

 

I always am looking for you

no matter where I am

no matter where I go

 

Your face is the only one i see

the only face I want to see

the only one I need to see

 

No matter how large the group

no matter who is there

it's you i'm looking for

and only you...

Author's Note

old poem

Reviews

[Raymond]

Nice work...but I think even nicer is the thought and feeling behind it, we all search for someone to feel this way about, and to feel this way about us...hopefully they happen between to same two people...otherwise you got a J giels song called Love Stinks....yeah, google it, you werent born yet :)

[JanieB]

This is so true when you are blinded by love or obsession. Good write.

[Calypso]

So full of love. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet though.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. Flowed like a song for a romantic movie. I like the emotion and the desire in your words. Thank you for the outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautifully written peice

[M Garcia]

Nicely done. Shows so much.

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, I loved it.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

That feeling of special love.

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love does crazy things to the eyes..

[Red]

I agree with the majority on this poem. I felt that the idea was stuck in a loop. It felt like the same idea over and over again. Regardless, this is nice, but I think it could use some improvement. Try to make the reader understand why it's so important to see their face or just them alone. Most importantly, as I've stated previously, this felt like it was a song on repeat with the same lyrics over and over again. Despite what I've said, keep on writing.
-Red