I don't hate the boy

I don't hate the boy

A Poem by sarah

My affection is hard to express
My anger is hard to describe 
My pain is hard to put down in words

I loved a boy
My heart was full of nothing but joy
Anger and pain couldn't have been farther away

My world was beautiful
So happy
So bright

He made me smile like never before
But then reality set in
Both our hearts were broken

He hid his pain
I let my pain come forth
This caused more pain

I don't hate the boy I once loved
Frustration is hard to hide
But hatred is far from the right word to describe

The sting is still there
But I don't wish him harm
My heart is still broken

And that is unchanged

 

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Not my best work i know! I just felt like I needed to write this

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Cool poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know the feeling of just having to write! I really enjoyed this. I know this feeling of love well. You don't approve of the harm they caused you, you are so frusturated that they don't seem to care that you are in so much pain, yet you would never EVER wish harm on them. Excellent expression.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very good poem. Best not to hold hate and disappointment. Better to be friendly and hopefully stay friends. I like the gentle and kind story in the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this one :)
Good job ! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's a great nice poem!
I sometimes feel how you feel, no matter what, your heart just command you to write something. But I think you shouldn't edit lots on this poem, cause you may want to keep that rush to write! The feeling will be totally unsame if you edit somethjing without a suitable feeling!

Posted 13 Years Ago


its nice that you can say that you don't hate him. i think that your best works are always the ones that you just let come out, i like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes pieces straight from the heart are some of the best ones and I think this is certainly the case for this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, that brings back a lot of memories for me. I have been there. I know how this feels. Good write, I like this one. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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