Tears

Tears

A Poem by sarah

I have forgotten how to cry
It seems almost impossible now
Like that part of me no longer exists


I have shed a tear
A single tear
No more no less


My throat has gotten tight
And I have squeezed my eyes shut tightly
Hoping to feel some release


But no such feeling came
The pain still remand
And no ease was in sight


I wish I could just recall the feeling
To feel relief sweep over me
To have gentle tears glide down my cheek


To be able to feel myself give way to my sorrow
To be able to accept everything that has happened
To allow myself a moment of peace


I envy those who can weep
Jealousy consumes me when I see tears on their cheeks
I just want to cry


But I have have forgotten how...
 
 
 

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
This was inspired by my dear sister Angie :-) I have wanted to really cry for a long time. Not just to get choked up, and have one or two tears come but really cry. But I am afraid I simply can't anymore. Anyway let me know what you think!

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It's very true.....i really like the way how you expressed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Feel like inside of the tears . And became one of them. Very nice flow and strange harmony . I like that very much

Posted 3 Years Ago


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it's the perfect release to cry..it's an emotional doorway..not always easy to open especially if your afraid that you won't be able to close it ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the colors...They match the feeling of the poem
Great write ! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SO SAD

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I cry at commercials. I really do cry easily. Great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! That's a amazign and beautiful poem!!
That's no my favourite lines. cause I love all of them!
Your poems, all of them, you did such a great job!!!
I understand exactly what you mean too!
Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, this makes me sad and think of how I use to feel. Good job on the description and the writing in general. Great poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow the colors really add to this! Beautifully penned my dear! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the colors you used. I did that once when writing about water. Really this is an amazing poem, and the last line . . . Finish this poem off perfectly nice job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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