In the mist

Black hair
Dark eyes
Low voice

Black heart
Evil soul
Dream's shattered

Still broken
Inner pain
Fake strength

Has fooled everyone
No one left to convince
Everyone believes his lies

But I still stand in the cold
Watching
Watching everyone comfort him

Comfort the lie
The deceit
The coward that he is

Someday someone will see
Someone will see who he really is
And on that day I will laugh

At his lowest point
At his breaking point
I'll be there

I'll lift his chin
Make him stare me in the face
And a smile will cross my face

I will chuckle and say
Quietly
Softly...

"I knew I wouldn't be the only one to see you
For who you really are" 
 

Author's Note

Not my best I know I just felt like writing it. Let me know what ya think!!

Reviews

[Zane]

Great work. :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

Sarah, if this isn't your best, I want to know what could be. Cause this work is just amazing. It was dark, and enjoyable. Plus, you actually unmasked the guy. Really good work once again Sarah

[JanieB]

Sarah..I think this piece is real good.

[Marie Harrison]

Loved this, you were the first to see him without his mask. Other's will soon see him too.

[Calypso]

I just loved this poem! It's so dark and mysterious.

[Adrien Hupp]

it's beautiful. i love it:)

[Rikkevi Rue]

interesting in its approach. You strike interest by focusing the attention. I like that

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it's like a story..I like poems that do that..you want to know what he did..and why your the only one who see's ...intriguing

[M Garcia]

Good job.

[Wondering Mind]

the dark side of Ms Sarah. Fast pace poem.