Hidden Blue

Life is Blue
Hypocrites surround me
when you really look at it
I stand alone
Not a single human being in sight

The sea is blue
Your candle burns bright
the sky is blue
beautiful in make
a persons mood is blue
disguising inner darkness

people even play the blues

Exposure of the soul
the world is blue
every touch burns
when you think about it

no healing touch will ever find me
life is all sorts of colors

mostly blue

No way of escape for us now
peoples tears are thought of as blue
mouth open wide
homes are painted blue
but no sound escapes from either

a persons thoughts can be blue
all are captive
which is very blue thinking
smile sweetly
no use hiding your fangs

I can see them
mostly blue
I know your intentions

I scream in vain
FOREVER!!!!

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AngelPaige1994/644845/ this is a poem that my sis and I wrote angie and I. We took both our poems and put them together let me know what you think!

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

What a fascinating write! I loved the concept of this piece, and thought that it was a really intriguing and original idea. I liked the style of this poem, and the fact that it wasn't entirely obvious that you had taken two separate poems and put them together, which was a concern that I initially had. I thought that the last two lines were a little random and a little brash for the rest of the piece, but other than that, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!
~PaperHearts

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great collaberation.. Well done

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I love the fact that it was two poems in one. I love love the fact that blue has many ways of expressing it self. Blue, as a feeling. Blue, as a color. Blue, as music. So much blue can be, and how beautiful it is in all the different ways.

[Marie Harrison]

Fun, it's nice you write together. Loved this!

[Geralyn Miller]

Interesting point of view. The lovely thing about blue is the extremely wide range of bluefrom palest spring sky to deepest indigo that bodes a winter storm; turquoise of the Caribbean to darkest teal of Atlantic storm sea. Blue can be cheerful or moody or downright sorrowful.

[Calypso]

Very good. You brought up an interesting point. According to psychology a little bit of exposure to blue will clam you down , but too much exposure to blue will depress you.
Very good poem.

[KAREN]

As I told her EXCELLENT!! I love the way blue is described in each verse! I mean I could feel the pain!

[tynamite]

I'm posting the same comment on both read requests. I never knew you both were sisters. I really like the first paragraph. This is really good. I think it's about someone missing someone.

[Sunny Skye]

Really good. Is blue your favorite color? You used it a lot on this poem but is good.

[Cynthia]

why can't my rother write poems with me?!
I feel so jealous of u having such a great sister! To write to have fun with you!
It's a amazing write!