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I do believe you feel...

I do believe you feel...

A Poem by sarah

Hmmm...well well

What is this turn of events

I do believe I have had an affect on you

 

Interesting....

 

I do believe I have gotten under your skin

I do think that was a wince

I saw that glare you gave him

 

Funny....

 

I do believe I've cracked your shell a bit

I saw how angry you got

When I didn't pay you any attention

 

Quite amusing...

 

I do believe you are letting

Some emotion seep though your walls

You showed some envy

 

Odd....

 

You said you didn't care what I did

You said you didn't care what I said

Or who I spoke too

 

Fascinating...

 

You kept my texts

You shoved that boy out of the way

You tried to keep my attention

 

LOL!.....

 

I saw you wince at my sly comments to you

I saw your eyes grow angry when I turned my back

 

Boy I do believe you care

And all I have to say to that

Is thanks for the laughs

 

© 2010 sarah


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Sounds here like someone is trying to lie to themselves but can't, and it might not be the person to whom it is dedicated to but who is sending the message. Small actions can often be misinterpreted and used to play on others feelings. Beware that while you might feel this way, it is more likely a juggle move by this person... nobody likes to feel what uncertainty is, so they keep something around to remind them of a time where there was at least something for sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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great write i love how it flows :P this goes in my libraby

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds here like someone is trying to lie to themselves but can't, and it might not be the person to whom it is dedicated to but who is sending the message. Small actions can often be misinterpreted and used to play on others feelings. Beware that while you might feel this way, it is more likely a juggle move by this person... nobody likes to feel what uncertainty is, so they keep something around to remind them of a time where there was at least something for sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and well written! You sure told him!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm.... there must be an interesting story attatched to this one... can't wait to hear all about it ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HAHAHA. I love the picture first off. Then I just felt the sarcasm the slight whisper in the words like facinating and interesting. Almost could see you tapping your lips :DD definetly one of my favorites

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool, Haha

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a suspicion this is not as it seems on the surface. I sense an underlying truth the reader does not know.
This is a fun read, well written, totally intrigueing.
P.S. Let me in on the joke, please.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay first of all I thought you were talking about you getting under another person's skin, but I never would have thought that it was about a cat@@@. this is brilliant~!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I have a library. And in my library are many books. I've read all of them and know most of the contents by heart. I used to loan out my books but folks forgot to return them. So...you might say...what's the difference? You've READ the book! You KNOW what's in the book! But then you see...that's NOT the point! It was MY book! And I didn't mind loaning it out until I started figuring I was NEVER going to get it back! Then, I got to missing my book...because it was MINE. Posession is for THINGS though...not PEOPLE. People should never OWN other people or even FEEL that they do. I think you get the message there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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