My life as a movie

My life as a movie

A Poem by sarah

I feel like my life is a movie
everyday
New dialog is written
New characters are added

I watch the business on set
People doing everything they can
To make it all perfect

The sets are being made
The lines are being written
The story being told

This movie is my life
And yet I don't seem to have a role
A character
A place

I have no lines
I have no part
I have no place

I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life

But no one can hear me
I scream
But they walk on by

No matter how hard I try
No one hears my screams
No one hears me

I feel like my life is a movie
But i'm not in it....

© 2011 sarah


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sarah
Just an idea

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Neat! I had a similar thought awhile ago. I tried to write a poem, but failed. I just couldn't write it in words this thought. You accomplished what I thought to the impossible, bravo!
I like it :) Very dark, but I can relate. My life feels like this movie, that doesn't end. The hurt, the pains, everything, just the same. Yet the movie keeps playing....
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this was very great, i sure loved this one. this was very interesting and cuts real deep, with that feeling of always being left out. not being the main character of your own movie. that's very creative of you xD
"I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life

But no one can hear me
I scream
But they walk on by

No matter how hard I try
No one hears my screams
No one hears me

I feel like my life is a movie
But i'm not in it...."
great work!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's a really great poem! I love the idea so much… I think I might try something like this. It's really a great concept.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem. Sometime in our life we can feel alone and forgotten. I like your story in the poem.
"I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If there was ever a movie of your life i would definetly watch it." New dialouge,New characters. thats not life thats a perfect play.keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolute Truth...!!!!!

Good shot..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work! Very imaginative.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neat! I had a similar thought awhile ago. I tried to write a poem, but failed. I just couldn't write it in words this thought. You accomplished what I thought to the impossible, bravo!
I like it :) Very dark, but I can relate. My life feels like this movie, that doesn't end. The hurt, the pains, everything, just the same. Yet the movie keeps playing....
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This idea was great! Alot of people can relate to this, going through everyday life feeling like they are in a movie, but they can't find themselves!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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