Lost
A Poem by
sarah
I don't know what to do anymore I am so confused And lost I stand in the rain Reaching up to heaven With one simple question Am I supposed to stay? Should I try to make things better? Should I try again? I am so lost Tears fill my eyes And I fall to my knees He broke my heart I turned my back And ran away I cried all the tears And I felt release I felt freedom But I keep coming back.... What am I supposed to do? If I where meant to stay Wouldn't have their been some sort of sign Tears run down my face Hopelessness fills my heart Pain washes over me I said my goodbyes I forgot the pain I released myself from everything But it doesn't feel right And so I sit Alone Completely lost So as I sit here I look up at heaven And scream IF I WAS MEANT TO STAY WHY CAN'T YOU SIMPLY TELL ME SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
© 2011 sarah
Author's Note
This is a ranting/rambling poem. I am going through some stuff in my head, a little confusion. let me know what you think
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Easy to get lost and feel not needed. Life is a wild field trip. We will have many good days and many bad days. We must get up from the bad days and go forward. Make the good day last as long as possible. A excellent poem with many questions.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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listen to your soul..it know what you need..it will lead you to peace..we all know the answers..we just don't want to hear..
Posted 2 Years Ago
listen to your soul..it know what you need..it will lead you to peace..we all know the answers..we just don't want to hear..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very good write but the song is kinda depresing but i love it any way
100/100
Posted 2 Years Ago
very good write but the song is kinda depresing but i love it any way
100/100
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sometimes, in fact most times we need to make our own signs, we ourselves tie us down choose to not understand, or understand that which we choose
Posted 2 Years Ago
Sometimes, in fact most times we need to make our own signs, we ourselves tie us down choose to not understand, or understand that which we choose
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great Write, Very Personal and hits me hard
Posted 2 Years Ago
Great Write, Very Personal and hits me hard
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That was truly great. Everyone does have their good and bad days. It just a choice we all must make: do we get up and try again, or simply just quit? It can be difficult when you become lost, either with the thought of neglect, isolation, or you've lost someone close to you. These are challenges in life we all face, every day. You're a wonderful writer with lots of potential. I'll stop by again and check out some more of your work
Posted 2 Years Ago
That was truly great. Everyone does have their good and bad days. It just a choice we all must make: do we get up and try again, or simply just quit? It can be difficult when you become lost, either with the thought of neglect, isolation, or you've lost someone close to you. These are challenges in life we all face, every day. You're a wonderful writer with lots of potential. I'll stop by again and check out some more of your work
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice rant
Posted 2 Years Ago
Nice rant
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Easy to get lost and feel not needed. Life is a wild field trip. We will have many good days and many bad days. We must get up from the bad days and go forward. Make the good day last as long as possible. A excellent poem with many questions.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
Easy to get lost and feel not needed. Life is a wild field trip. We will have many good days and many bad days. We must get up from the bad days and go forward. Make the good day last as long as possible. A excellent poem with many questions.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
:( i'm sorry your having a hard time...
Posted 2 Years Ago
:( i'm sorry your having a hard time...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very emotional write! We all have felt lost at times, keep going you'll find your way out!
Posted 2 Years Ago
Very emotional write! We all have felt lost at times, keep going you'll find your way out!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a powerful poem! Good write, sometimes it helps just write your feelings down.
Posted 2 Years Ago
This is a powerful poem! Good write, sometimes it helps just write your feelings down.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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