I feel somthing again

I feel somthing again

A Poem by sarah

Fluttery feelings
Heart pounding
Nerves out of control
Mind spinning

It's been a long time
Since i've felt any of this
For so long I allowed myself
To stay heart broken

I found contentment
In feeling sorry for myself
Feeling alone
And sad

But that has changed
Temporary?
Most likely 
But I am content

I enjoy seeing him smile at me
I love hearing his laughter
I love how he makes me laugh
How he makes me forget

I have been numb for so long
So angry
So sad
So alone

But even though I know
This feeling may never last
I have learned
I can feel again

He makes me happy
He makes me nervous
He challenges me
He makes me feel pretty

I am no longer sad
Alone
Angry

Because I finally
Feel something....

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I like this guy he is soooooooooo cute kinda looks like Rob Low and he is leaving for college in a few months so this is only temporary but I am happy just being able to feel this way even if it only lasts a moment

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Ah, this is a sweet, lovely and honest poem. I'm glad to have read it. Just two observations: second stanza second line maybe it should be 'since' instead of sense and 5th stanza third line maybe 'he' instead of the first 'me'? Nothing major, you would have picked it up anyway.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Like it...Like the way you have expressed the feelings..!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

does he know how you feel? If not maybe you should tell him. This is a very good write. keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The happiness of love. Best days in a life. I like the description of kind words and desire in your poem. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful write... I can just see so many young girls like yourself feeling like this when they find love... This is a beautiful write... Loved it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey I'm sorry it took me so long to get round to reviewing your poem. I'm having to "borrow" my little brother's computer in order for me to use this site, so I aplogise for late review requests. I really enjoy reading this; it really captured the feelings and emotions one feels when they set their eyes on the person that makes their heart beat errattically. You feel so good everytime you see them, talk to them, hear them...It's a great moment to cherish. It was really fluent, beautifully written and something everybody should take the time to read over. Wonderful writing and I hope you keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cute i love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write. Very sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww so sweet.. ^^ i love that type of feeling too. Its the greatest feeling and its like nothing bad can happen you know. Love your poem! =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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