heart on a sleeve

I wear my heart on my sleeve
Waiting for you to see me
Waiting for you to take my heart

I watch as you walk pass me
Completely oblivious to my feelings
You have no idea do you?

I try to tell you
Every day
Every night

But you seem so far away
Untouchable
Out of my reach

Do you know I dream of you every night?
Do you realize my heart skips a beat with every word you speak?
Do you see my eye shine when I look up at you?

I have my heart in my hands
And I'm just waiting
For you to take it
 

Author's Note

idk how well this flows but this was my only way to express how i'm feeling now

Reviews

[Calypso]

For me this means more then just a desire to pour out your love, to me this is the story of someone who is having a problem (what ever that may be) and they desire to say something and the emotions are clear but who they are trying to send the message to isn't receiving it.

[alexlessah]

Your very romantic that's wonderful, because your romantic poems are soo sweet!

[The Analog Kid]

Flow is just fine. Love is funny. We try to be honest and obvious and sometimes it backfires. Then, of course, after torturing ourselves we accept that it was not meant to be.....or your subject reads your poem, does an about face and takes your heart that you offered.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastic..!!!

[Dushyant Thadani]

The feeling in this is so beautiful... Great job... You are seriously a sheer romantic...

[Maya Storm]

Oh Sarah you give out so much of you when you write, I can't help but to just love it... Another good piece once more.

[just take a breath]

i know exactly how you feel! ugh and its like the worst feeling ever! haha but trust me, once you start telling people you like/love them, it gets a world easier to do it the next time (if there is a next time) and it feels like a weight has been lifted off your shoulders. i really love this write! its simple, relate-able, and sweet

[Carolyn]

This Is really great :) I'm hopeless at writing poems so for you to be able write something that flows so well and expresses how you truly feel shows just how talented you are :)

[Lime-Eater]

This was very good. It flows really well! Love it! :)

[WynterPhoenix]

I think the flow is great. The wording is great. Great job.