A place to WRITE..one name

A place to WRITE..one name

A Poem by SAGAR

A place to WRITE..one name

Your name I long to scribble in this clear chart
Empty spaces searched then found my longing heart
As many times my beat may sink..falls apart
Wish to fill each pore and make a new start…

Fear this dream I visualize shouldn’t be broken
Each day and night want to see you in my eyes not slacken
As many times my hands may feel this drape silken
The aura and magic relumine the fantasy..never let it darken…

Teary eyes restless soul but don’t want to lose my sleep
Own mind is my enemy..but nobody wants to peep
As many times I try to run from this fragrance..going more deep
See this broken star become a full moon..beauty making me sweep… ONE NAME

© 2014 SAGAR

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how beautiful!… it flows so well, relevant to each of our own thoughts. This is what great writing is…when the reader relates to what is being written.. I love it… keep sharing ! : )

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4 Years Ago

Thanks for your view and I am happy you found resonance in the write up.

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Added on April 17, 2014
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Amritsar, Punjab, India