the journey called "Life" /

In the toughest times, you row your boat alone,

So just keep in mind my friend, it’s not even worth staying in a safe zone...

One day you'll have to reach out to the horizons,

So just keep in mind my friend, you’ll have people to share your happiness then...

Maybe you’ll grow tough or probably you’ll be the same,

But keep in mind my friend; you always play alone in this game...

You hold that belief & faith in yourself,

Cuz keep in mind my friend, there'll be enough problems sent...

One day you’ll be close to victory all alone,

But keep in mind my friend, the ego can lead to your doom...

Though, always keep your God in your heart,

But keep in mind my friend; you’ll also need friends near and far...

Reviews

[Akshita]

I LOVE RHYMING...nd ofcourse the msg is also a good 1.....

[Sakshi]

thanks Akshita ..

[Wikiwit]

The pic added a nice touch...
The poem struck an affirmative chord in my mind...

Walk you shall, alone on this path,
But for no reason, blame your heart.

For if friends you have who are there for you,
What use is thinking of the tormenting few.

[Sakshi]

Those are amazing lines!

Thanks for dropping by Wikiwit!

[J. Viands]

I really like it but the flow was a lil rocky

[Sakshi]

Thanks to reading, I'll work on the flow..

[the_stoic]

nice message ! though the flow went a bit abrupt towards the end. also avoid short forms like 'cuz' . keep writing :)

[Sakshi]

thanks for reading!
cheers!

[Cerise]

Aww...amazingly written...loved it

[Sakshi]

Thanks fancyfati :)

[Cerise]

your welcome

[SouthernBelle]

this is very good i loved it please dont stop writing

[Sakshi]

thanks for reading :)
and, i won't.