Shortest Love Story

Shortest Love Story

A Story by Salmon Kp
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I have written this in talehunt

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We both knew that we were soulmates. We exchanged gazes for longtime and then turned faces. We were of different colors. We were not brave enough. We decided to move on.

© 2016 Salmon Kp


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This is sad! Sometimes we meet someone and think they are our soul mate and find out later they really weren't. I have done that before
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you BlueEyedAngel. I also have experienced the same
This is the Journey that starts & ends.
What people find an act brave enough?
To be in love or to fall out of love?
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. People should be brave enough to be in low but sadly they are afraid of th.. read more
Mary Christabel George

8 Years Ago

Exactly...
Some perfect stories are never started for fear of failure. A lot said in the short story. Thank you for sharing the amazing tale.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. May be they read a lot of love stories with tragic end. They might thought their s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You did well using minimum words and you are welcome.
I agree with barleygirl. The age old tale . It reminds me of West Side Story, or Romeo and Juliette with a twist.
I look foward to reading more of your stuff

bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Bill. I am really flattered with your review.
short story, but the message is so clear and can be easily interpreted

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you Adesanya, I am so moved.
I love your short short short creation. This tells an age-old story in an unusual way. I kinda hate the word "soulmates" becuz it's over-used & abused. Also, for the last sentence, I would delete "had" becuz then the tense matches the rest of your story. Otherwise, you've done a good job telling a whole story in very few words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you barleygirl for your kind words. I did notice the mistake and edited. I use to write on Tal.. read more
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Sounds almost a bit like prose poetry to me. Nicely expressed piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

V

8 Years Ago

Maybe. I focus on reading and writing here. Thanks for the link, anyways.
Salmon Kp

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your patience. I was in a hurry while writing that comment. Now when I read my comment.. read more
V

8 Years Ago

No it's ok.

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Added on March 15, 2016
Last Updated on March 18, 2016
Tags: talehunt, short stories, fiction, flash fiction

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Salmon Kp
Salmon Kp

Bangalore, India



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