Soulmates

Soulmates

A Poem by Sally Edwards
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A poem of love

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I gently awake in your arms firm and loving,

you look into my eyes and smile that special smile,

I feel safe and at peace with the world

for I am forever home in your arms,

Our lips meet with featherlight touches,

that sends sensual thoughts of love

coursing through our bodies,

Our kisses deepen as passions awake

You move over me and slowly enter,

together we move as one and as our

souls reach heaven, together we peak,

then finally we mould into each other,

soulmates forever.


Sally Edwards

15/03/2008

 


© 2008 Sally Edwards



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Ooohh. Awesome poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


What a beautiful piece, I can't think of anything better than waking in someones arms :) really well writtern, well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow , you really touch the spiritual side of the reader, as well as the physical. quite amazing really. very detailed, excellent piece of work

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I loved the flow. The idea of waking up in the arms of our soul mate I think is what most people want to do. Great poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow i realy like this write it is full of passion and it is truly gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i loved it
justin

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhh this is so rich and full and passionate!
Ahhhh... such love, such connection.
This is truly gorgeous!
Your imagery is vivid and thought provoking.
I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very passionate :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully penned. So romantic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully sensual and gentle .... gorgeous writing ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the love in this piece. It was subtle but strong. The image of two entities merging together in the end was wonderful. I could just imagine as becoming one with another in that moment of bliss.
Great Write! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sally Edwards
Sally Edwards

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Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..

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