Love

Love

A Poem by Sally Edwards
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I started to think about when two people fall in love, who perhaps shouldn't...........but we can't always help who we fall in love with. This is based on an old flame from years ago only the outcome was different to my poem. I'm a hopeless romantic, so..

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You fill up my mind with enticing thoughts
Around and around in my head is all sorts
Such wonderful erotic, sensual images
The tension has been building for ages
When at last they get their release
Will the turmoil finally cease?

You smile that smile, and I can't say no
I falter and know I should really go
Instead into your arms I flow
We kiss lustfully making me glow
Together we sigh and with haste undress
Together we writhe our shyness less

We move together with such animal lust
Until my fears are abated and dust
What was so wrong at the start
Now seems right in my heart
Forever and ever we have to be
For now you are my world you see

Sally Edwards
22/03/2008




© 2008 Sally Edwards



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I'm confused on this one.... Does this assume that Sexual Lust is the same thing as Love? or have do we assume, that these two have already gone through the mental processes of love, and are just getting to the physical? or is this a heated random moment of passion, like on a one night stand?
It's writen very well, and your images are vivid as always.
I just felt that it was about lust, not love. :) Just my opinion. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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wow this was a very amazing piece...i rlly liked it x]

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very beautiful piece. I love the way is flows and the romantic qualities to it. Such a wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think this captures the sense of romantic lover between young lovers. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i don't understand where the love is in this,
but i understand the desire for a fairytale ending.
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like it a lot!!!
p.s. please review mine!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, is the tyoing keys hot now? Lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again I love your poem. You are a spectacular writer. Good rhyme and rhythum.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree with nature's feet,you could make two out of one lol,great work though ,just love is nothing like that (: but lust is

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good input with words.=] i love the idea.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is really great! The images you created were perfect! I loved the idea that this was about two people falling in love instead of out of love. It was good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Sally Edwards
Sally Edwards

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Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..

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