Life with arthritis

Life with arthritis

A Poem by Sally Edwards
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A six word poem

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Cures my  ills...........the arthritis pills

 

 

Sally Edwards

23/03/2008


© 2008 Sally Edwards



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Naturopathy! pills are just a way for the pharmicudical companies to get rich!
The pain suck, i know. But we as a race need to get away from popping pills everytime something is wrong with us. It makes us poorer, and a small select few billions!
Oh my! Did i say that! (blush...) Sorry, just my opinion :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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That is hard! I have it at the age of 32. Shouldn't have skiied and broken bones! Now I know when ever it rains! My arm will hurt when it does!

Posted 9 Years Ago


short and to the point! i like how some of your poems are full of imgery and others are very simple, but charming!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very clever :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"wish it were true.......I'd come and join you"!! LOL (revealing)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow short but good i hope to see more of your writing soon

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL !! Right to the point. Refreshing and funny.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but true and also clever..one thing I have learned in my life...the longer you live..the more pills it takes to just keep you alive and going..God bless...valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was good! I loved that it only had six words. The structure was perfect for this piece. I loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The image of someone holding up a huge pill, and a glass of water, knowing that it will take the pain away, but the imense size of the filled tube of anti-pain solution, is just a bit more then they can take at the time.
Great Write about something so painful!
:)
Better the pill, then knawing the ailing part of you off! lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Repeat every six hours as needed! Great write! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Sally Edwards
Sally Edwards

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Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..

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