In the office

In the office

A Poem by Sally Edwards
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This is a six word only poem

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 Fingers slowing, Pile growing, Desk overflowing

 

 

Sally Edwards 25/03/2008


© 2008 Sally Edwards



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Oh, honey...I hear that! Part of my job is to glare at a company for nineteen hours a day (okay, maybe just eighteen). Either way--funny!

Posted 9 Years Ago


THat very good for you in a good way


Posted 9 Years Ago


:^)... been there! Good on you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great poem. I work in an office, so I can definitely relate to "fingers slowing," "pile growing," and "desk overflowing." Grr.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great work with such few words! I loved that you expressed so much!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The image you gave in those few lines captured the cubicle chaos. A really good job. Rain..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brilliant !!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting, I like it and I am not normally one to like minimalist poems, but this one conveys all the frustration of an entire generation stuck in the cubicles that run our lives.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh god! The curse of the Cubicle worker! I've been there for 5 long years i sat behind one, and i know how the song goes.
Six words and you have captured the full image!
Great Write! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

someone give this girl a prize........short ..........impactful.....yet another case of the power of the basics!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sally Edwards
Sally Edwards

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Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..

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