IN THE FINICKY LIGHT

A summer scene chances are we won't get to see or understand.

in the finicky light of a so-so afternoon

a rabble of cream butterflies

and a squadron of dark gnats,

cross-flying in one another's air space,

salt-and-pepper

the straw head

of a sleeping garden scarecrow.

Reviews

[W.k.kortas]

Has a very haiku-like feel to it. A tightly crafted image; a very nice little snapshot.

[Gandré]

this was wonderfully painted. thank you for entering my contest.
I enjoyed your beautiful summer afternoon.

[angelina neves]

Uau! wonderful image paint!