Skein

Skein

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Geese fly in V formation led by the navigator goose. I used the V for victory.

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Skein ( Geese fly in V shapes led by the navigator goose)

( A romance poem for Valentine’s )…………………………………………….By Sami Khalil

The Poem:

 

Feel the silent whirs of my broken heart

Heartbeats whittling at tenanted love

Listen to cries of the winds in relevance

The other side of hollow woods thereof.

 

Those ghostly times that laid us bare

Endlessly staring at lonely lazuline skies

I have been through this dance before

Run, run away from morbid love sighs.

 

I have been buried in mottled graves

Worlds collided till the verge of death

As navigator goose leads flock in skeins

Victory will lead me, every single breath.

 

 

 

 


© 2014 Sami Khalil



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A novel and poignant approach to Valentine's Day.
The navigator goose was certainly born to lead.
Magnificent piece of work, Sami!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. So true and well said. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely visit and sharing...:)........ read more
Love the pictures and the write. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Valentine for this lovely review and kindness. Have a good weekend...:)........ read more
Amazing. You have expressed your feelings so well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for the lovely review and sharing. Glad you like it. Take care...:).. read more
Seems kind of sad but I can visualize the whole picture...good read and write for sure!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. It does dear poet. You have nailed it on the head. Thank you so much for all...See you soon...:.. read more
aweh, this is so sad, and lonesome. It makes me have a sense of pain and hurt, it's really passionate, great read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well felt. Thank you so much for the lovely visit and sharing...:)................... read more
Nature teaches us how to love and how to survive. Yes, even thrive!
I like this as a valentine poem Sami. Creative and outside the box thinking here.
Thank you for sharing your heart in your poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well observed. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely visit and sharing your l.. read more
really touching and well written, my friend..


Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow.Glad you felt it that way. Honored by your visit and sharing...:)......................
Nice poem, interesting view on life and love, wonderful write :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review. Glad you like it...Have a great one...:).... read more
A broken heart and yet an optimism to love! This is full of inspiration, Sami. I like it. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

It is indeed. So glad you like it and that you have felt it too...Many and many thank yous Eloisa..... read more

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Tuscaloosa, AL



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