Magnets

Magnets

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Invisible forces that pull and push...

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Magnets.........................................By Sami Khalil
Invisible forces that pull and push...

                                               The Poem
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I have waited and waited for you...
On human levels...in sunset arms...
Stretching shapes through diamonds
Tethering anticipations in color sails
Believing in the powers of arbitrary wonders
Of smoke and mirrors with a hint of the vulnerable.

I have spoken to clapping thunders...
With a surprised face...in an Ophylic silence...
Scattering across craggy impressions
Gathering resurrections through swift currents
Skipping the profundity of magic in nature
to find ancient parallels of you without reservations.

I have uttered a different language...
Above silver lines...in universal tongues...
Believing every language has a soul
Every aimed flight has a destination
Every harvest has a season of nurturing
where lands find slow ransom through the roots.

I have waited and waited for you...









© 2014 Sami Khalil



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Incredible. Just...incredible. I love how much talent of yours this shows, even through it's not that long. Every line is as good as it could possibly be. Unbelievable.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet and artist for this wonderful review and kind visit. All appreciate.. read more
Your a very good poet. I might not get the meaning but I do really like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. Grazie mille...:)....
"Magnets" inexorably attracts transcendent beauty; inherently repels anything that could, in the least, mar that beauty.
A sublime symphony, Maestro!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much brilliant poet for this amazing review and kind appreciation. You are appreci.. read more
As always, sweeping scope. That intertwines human feelings with nature and a kind of cosmic mystery. I always love the breadth and depth of what you write. No easy thing to weave the big pictures together.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Nila for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:)...... read more
I always have to read your poems more than once to get the entire perspective; they're that cryptic! Whoever it is you were waiting for, you sure went through some great lengths to find. What attracted me the most was your reference to speaking in several tongues; also, your analogies of nature and its phenomena was outstanding. I think you have been searching for an honest reader, and your magnet surely has gathered you many.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and perspective. I'm so appreciative. .. read more
Sami this is truely one beautiful poem, and as was once said:
''The opposite atract each other'' But all of that has to do with the magnets repeling or being in withing
Great work, I love it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true ans well articulated Lizardo. You have graced me with this wonderful review. All rich b.. read more
Lizardo

2 Years Ago

You are welcome and thank you :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)........................
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Gee
Certainly knocks my "little miss muffet" and "lingerie drawer lover"into their rightful place.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much...:)..................
Gee

2 Years Ago

My pleasure
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)....................
A beautiful write. That attraction… it's like the seas and the moon, forever bound in their dance.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. So thankful for the time and review...:)............
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)................................
It is beautiful writing Sami and I'm never surprised; you are a wonderful poet. The abstract form was clever; Your words are a maze of opulance and wonder. Just magnificent. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

^^~^^:)..............................
Confuser

2 Years Ago

/AFdsl;k.......................
Confuser

2 Years Ago

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I'm checking setting; unreal.
dear Sami ... In sunset arms... so full of
charm... your words reflect a dream of
eternal meaning... truly... Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So lovely from you say and visit. So thrilled you enjoyed this write. All rich blessings...:).... read more

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