Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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The words come to life off of the page. Love story meets classics.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wow. So thankful to you dear poet for this lovely review and kindness. Take care...:)................. read more
I love this piece! I love the voice of the poem. It speaks of love before it becomes intentional. Love often starts out as a compelling and natural action. Long term love is work, passion, and dedication. But beginning love for me is always looked upon as fresh and easy! All stages of love are amazing but this piece spoke of the beginning sweetness when it's first ripe!
Love it!
Tabby

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind.. read more
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MCS
Heartwarmingly beautiful!!
I always enjoy your image selection.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

Wow. Thank you so much MCS for this lovely review and kindness. All appreciated...:).......
Wow. So beautiful and wonderful my friend.
"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
I loved you! "
This is a classic and thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and appreciation. An honor .. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

I loved this poem and was my honor to read my friend.
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

:::::))))))).......
The poem talks to me of an unconditional love, a love that has remained strong in varying circumstances. Beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and apprec.. read more
Sounds like an melody of a song Sami. Love makes you visit all the new, unknown and divine places. Good one

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much beloved poet for all...:)......
Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

your welcome Sami :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)...........
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A great awakening, knowing the infinity of soul love and forever's grace. Quite melodic, the music of your pen...dreamy!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated dear poet. Thank you so much for all. Have a great one...:)....
So beautiful and so beautifully written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. All appreciated...:)...
Love this touching piece, reminds me of the early years with my husband :) I love poetry that makes my heart smile and this one does it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:.. read more
Lovely. All of my senses danced as I read it. Beautiful description of nature. I felt the passion and love, and by the way, for the first time for me, the paintings actually gave an aura to the piece. You're a true poet of love; an honest ambassador!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. I love that. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. You are .. read more

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