Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[Shirlena]

The pictures have the image similar to the one my mind conjured as I read your poem...poems about love are for me, are the most adored and the subject we like to write about as much as being engaged in. This poem is seductive in everyway.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Shirlena for this amazing review and kind words. So glad to know you prefer this genre. Have a great one...:)..................

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful imagery allows the reader to read a poet's heart here, Sami.
"I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly..." Great line!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So thankful beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. I'm pleased when my friends and readers enjoy the poem...Take care...:).......................

[Amy]

"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!" I find that part intriguing. not much words need to be said. great piece!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So wonderful from you Amy to visit and share your joy. Many and many thank yous for all...:)...........................

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Was a pleasure to read I truly enjoyed this read.

Thank you for your lovely review you
left on my page.


I loved these stanza's lines here.



Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you!




You crafted this piece very well.



Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. You are appreciated..:)......

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure you're quite welcome. Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Sami Khalil]

:)........

[Savannah Bly]

This was pure beautiful imagery! I absolutely loved it! The image was vivid and alive. Really great job Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. All appreciated...:)....

[Layla J Omorose]

Beautifully written poem. The innocence of love when its new and full of life. Before it is tainted by the world around us, before life comes and turns it upside down. Well done

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well spoken. You havd honored me by the visit and sharing...Take care...:).....

[Black Star Adept]

Really liked the deep feelings that is was portraying!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much....:)......

[Jip Martin]

A considerate amount of depth and quality in this piece.
Nicely done.
Ill read more like this, I hope.
The next to last line is brilliant.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and liking. I,m pleased by all...:)....

[Great Aunt Astri]

This is one of the best love poems I have read. Well written.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this wonderful review and vote of confidence. I appreciate it all...:)..........................

[Eve Ola]

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly! its beautiful. Well done here

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Eve for this lovely review and kind words. Have a great one...:)....................