Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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A considerate amount of depth and quality in this piece.
Nicely done.
Ill read more like this, I hope.
The next to last line is brilliant.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and liking. I,m pleased by all...:)....
This is one of the best love poems I have read. Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this wonderful review and vote of confidence. I appr.. read more
I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly! its beautiful. Well done here

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Eve for this lovely review and kind words. Have a great one...:)............... read more
Wizard of words is now back to magical romantic charms. Hope ladies can survive all this :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Hahaha. Thank you so much Avinash for your lovely visit and words. I do hope so. Better to spread th.. read more
"i read your eyes. I fathomed the silence" - the epitome of pure romance. Beautiful scenes painted with words, great techniques like repetition, alliteration, metaphor, assonance and most of all, a damn fine read :) Penny

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. I'm so graced by your wonderful visit and review. So glad you like this romantic write...Be ble.. read more
Such a romantic write i loved it.This made my day. :) you've so beautifully captured the wonderful moments- the time when we look into the eyes of our love the whole world comes to a standstill.We become aware that they are the only one who can turn our sorrows to mirth and darkness to light. :) Well done again.You made me remember my first and only love :)

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

"the time when we look into the eyes of our love the whole world comes to a standstill.We become awa.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

3 Years Ago

Its always my pleasure.. you never fail to amaze me :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:).....................
Love this one, Sami. As a romantic person, I enjoy pieces about love and friendship. She is a lucky woman to have you. Even when you don't speak, you can read each others' eyes. Yes, the heart knows and feels everything.
So romantic. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the share.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Dhaye for the lovely review, sentiments and continued support. All rich bless.. read more
Such a remarkable love poem, heady without being heavy. Bravo.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much sweet friend for this lovely review and appreciation. Take care...:)....
Deborah is such a lucky lady to have such a beautiful poem written for her, to her. Did I ever mention my first loves name was Khalil? well it was his birthday five days ago, I never missed his birthday before, we have been blessed to remain in touch for all these years, he has a beautiful family now, I pray he is happy, he seems so. Now we are friends but not close like we once were but this poem reminds me of those days when I loved him so much like this poem reads but there never was a silent communication like you have with your Belle, when you find a love like that you hang on to it, many blessings my friend and this poem is such a beautiful gift to your beloved, may you have many many years together.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Words of wisdom. Until we meet again....:) ......
Corset

3 Years Ago

now i'll count to three and try to believe it myself :P
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)........................
amazing poem sami!
romantic, beautiful and lovely.
i loved it!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Pushkar for this lovely review and kind words. I'm so pleased you like it...:.. read more

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Added on July 20, 2014
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