Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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Beauty in your words with images that compliment and bring hope.
Wonderful love poem.
Truly sweet.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Josie for this enchanting and sweet review. So glad you like it...:).........
Josie E. Cook M. A.

2 Years Ago

You are welcome--always!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:).................
This is a beautiful poem about love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. Thank you so much for all...:).....
I love how this poem rolls off the tongue. Very well structured and beautiful word choice

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. Grazie mille...:)..... read more
Kasey Miriam

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome Sami. It's always a pleasure.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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I am happy I read this one! It filled my heart with giddiness. Beautiful! Just beautiful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. I'm happy you visited. Thank you so much for all...:).......
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2 Years Ago

welcome Sami :):)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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Absolutely stunning writing.....awakening the romance in our hearts!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. I'm thrilled you like i.. read more
Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Anytime :) I enjoyed stopping by.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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Not the usual love song but still a very romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:).... read more
Penny

2 Years Ago

My pleasure as always.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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hehehehe This is very sweet and gentle Sami...very much beautiful :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:.. read more
The Black Warrior

2 Years Ago

There is no need to thank me dear, thank you for sharing such wonderful work :D
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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I really don't have much to say about this poem becuase it's truely beautiful
Sami, You captured a whole scene of love in this poem, Really great writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Lizardo for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated too...:).. read more
Lizardo

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Sami :)
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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Wow I really like this piece. The lingo is simply divine and so are the pieces of artwork shown here to spice up the poem and give a sort of imagery. I must say that this is an amazing work of art here.
I especially loved the lines that say," Dancing with vim and vigor, Long before stars' dim flicker, And leaves that wither.
Job well done my friend. Keep up the good work and may you continue to be inspired.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. Happy New Year to you a.. read more
Your love poems are undeniably exceptional--uniquely lovely, mellow as a dream, and soul-gratifying.
Dynamite, Sami!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated as .. read more

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