Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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Wow I need a love like this!! How romantic and timeless this is. what a very lucky lady she is to receive a work this awesome.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. She is indeed. I'm also lucky to have great friends and wonderful writers like yourself...Have .. read more
Beautiful, stunning poem. I've seen so many cliche love letters. This is so unique. Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Victoria for this lovely review and kind words. All appreciated...:)........... read more
Oh My God,Sami!
You do it every time.
Every word marks the traits of true love.
The one who's got you,must be so lucky!
A lovely love-letter.
Every word melts into a thousand feelings.
Keep sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for the lovely review and kind sharing. I will. Many rich blessings.. read more
love.This explains true love, when you are with someone you love sometimes you both don't speak you just stare at each other and it seems like you're speaking. A beautiful feeling and connection captured and reflected here by such a good poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well spoken. I'm so glad you have visited and shared...Have a great one...:)......... read more
Very beautiful love can grow mature flourish
Express yourself words can be a kiss if let
Them be,!



I like writing love poems to.

Johnsonbobby

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So thankful for this lovely review and kind words. I'm so pleased you like it and this genre..... read more
Aww! That ending was perfectly romantic. The way I read it, I couldn't automatically tell where you were going and then when I got to the end, it was just wow.
-QuanaWana

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and liking. So honored you have visited...:).. read more
Long before the winnowing
Of the wind across soul-scented
Barns and old plowed fields…
the atmosphere in this piece is simply lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this amazing review and kind words. I'm pleased you like it... read more
Very creative and skillfully done. So romantic. A wonderful love poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. So glad you like it. Take c.. read more
Black Cat Fever

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)........................
If its accompanying illustration shows an Italian scene, a poem just has to be romantic, Sami! And, you don't disappoint: what sweet words, what passionately though discreetly expressed phrases in this post.. tis lovely, truly. No sure of this line - 'Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,'

Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Emma for this lovely review and kind words. I love anything Italian and it sh.. read more
Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,
With poignant looks at life and laughter.
Long before roots remember
soil’s drifted fragrances,

this is truly exquisite. well penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear Zahra for this amazing review and appreciation. I'm pleased by all...:)... read more

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Added on July 20, 2014
Last Updated on December 1, 2014

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Sami Khalil

Tuscaloosa, AL



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