Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 











© 2014 Sami Khalil


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This is soo romantic and the paintings are beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Hostyn.
Peacegal

9 Years Ago

It's true:)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Thank you again....:).............
You captured again with your words those special moments when two souls are inlove head over heels with each other . The world seems to have stood still .Nothing moves no one matters . Its like the universe revolves around them and they are the center of the world .Love indeed is such a mystifying feeling . Excellent expression of words .

Posted 9 Years Ago


NeiL ArandA

9 Years Ago

My pleasure ...
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:).....................
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:).....................
Had to look up plectrums. Now I know. "Long before . . ." A leading statement, which in this case, is instrumental in allowing the reader to connect to the next line of thought. Enjoyed immensely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind gestures. All appreciated...:.. read more
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B.J
Oh! wonderfully done I enjoyed reading your poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Barb for the gracious review and kind words. I'm pleased...:)..........
B.J

9 Years Ago

you're welcome
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:)................................
The poem "Aware" is absolutely Great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Joe for this great review and lovely visit. I'm honored by all...:)............ read more
You are a poet sir! Amazing lovespeak!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you kindly Penlady. All appreciated...:).....................
This is absolutely beautiful and well-written. Very engaging!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Anne for this engaging review and lovely words. You have graced me with all.... read more
Wow I need a love like this!! How romantic and timeless this is. what a very lucky lady she is to receive a work this awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. She is indeed. I'm also lucky to have great friends and wonderful writers like yourself...Have .. read more
Beautiful, stunning poem. I've seen so many cliche love letters. This is so unique. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Victoria for this lovely review and kind words. All appreciated...:)........... read more
Oh My God,Sami!
You do it every time.
Every word marks the traits of true love.
The one who's got you,must be so lucky!
A lovely love-letter.
Every word melts into a thousand feelings.
Keep sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for the lovely review and kind sharing. I will. Many rich blessings.. read more

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