Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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The softness in the poem makes it beautiful and sensual great write of romance

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and soft words. Many rich blessings...:)...... read more
What a wonderful,sweet, and poignant poem this is. Great write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Norah for the lovely review and sweet appreciation. I'm honored by all...Take.. read more
A dreams eloquent requiem for the unseen a vision of love unbound well the rest takes you and her through time and space.
If this is about someone you loved and are for searching for or are still love her i wish you finally find her through dreams as well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. A wonderful review indeed Joe. Your words are so poetic and lovely. All rich blessings...:)...... read more
Joe_VILOT_

3 Years Ago

thank ya'
Amiego.......
What went through your mind when writing this?

And .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

My love for her off course and also the longing for the old country. Thank you kindly for all...:).... read more
WOW...wow...wow...brilliant! Thisis super my friend! I will save to library!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for super review. Looking forward to.reading your wonderful new .. read more
"Painted in the sheen's of love prompt" I think that line right there says it all. You have a very unique style to your writing and I really enjoy reading your work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and kind visit. You are appreciated...:)...... read more
Conversely, it was “just us”,
Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,
With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Beautiful !!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Sasha for this wonderful review and visit. All rich blessings...:)............. read more
Sasha

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)...............
The painting left me speechless too. It's breathtaking!

Posted 3 Years Ago


"Long before roots remember
soil’s drifted fragrances,
Or the five senses of the truest form,
Away from all common places."

Love knows its right place and never fails to reach it's true abode.

"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
I loved you!"

Love is so...We cannot be but aware... I am speechless how beautifully true your words are.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. I'm speechless at your wonderful review and visit. You are appreciated. glad you like it...Take.. read more
It has a sense of innocence morphing into maturity as the poem goes along...I like the balance between nature and one-to-one intimacy...I love : Long before our silent questions / Became aware of potentiality...that's where it kind of went from innocent to mature for me...nice work Sami :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well observed dear poet and friend. I,m so pleased you like this write. All rich bl.. read more
You know I am quite the hopeless romantic… and I must say this poem tickled my fancy… quite an eloquent and charming piece of writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much talented poet for this wonderful review. I,m pleased you like it. Grazie Mill.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

you are most welcome sir.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)..........................

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