Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[LadyAnn68]

WOW...wow...wow...brilliant! Thisis super my friend! I will save to library!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for super review. Looking forward to.reading your wonderful new writes. Take care ....:).............

[willweb]

"Painted in the sheen's of love prompt" I think that line right there says it all. You have a very unique style to your writing and I really enjoy reading your work.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and kind visit. You are appreciated...:)................

[Sasha]

Conversely, it was “just us”,
Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,
With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Beautiful !!!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Sasha for this wonderful review and visit. All rich blessings...:)........................

[Sasha]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...............

[DIVYA]

The painting left me speechless too. It's breathtaking!

[DIVYA]

"Long before roots remember
soil’s drifted fragrances,
Or the five senses of the truest form,
Away from all common places."

Love knows its right place and never fails to reach it's true abode.

"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
I loved you!"

Love is so...We cannot be but aware... I am speechless how beautifully true your words are.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I'm speechless at your wonderful review and visit. You are appreciated. glad you like it...Take care...:)......................

[kublakhan27]

It has a sense of innocence morphing into maturity as the poem goes along...I like the balance between nature and one-to-one intimacy...I love : Long before our silent questions / Became aware of potentiality...that's where it kind of went from innocent to mature for me...nice work Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well observed dear poet and friend. I,m so pleased you like this write. All rich blessings...:)........

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You know I am quite the hopeless romantic… and I must say this poem tickled my fancy… quite an eloquent and charming piece of writing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much talented poet for this wonderful review. I,m pleased you like it. Grazie Mille...:).......

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

you are most welcome sir.

[Sami Khalil]

:)..........................

[Enayet1999]

Great! Just phenomenal! May i ask if you could review my writing- content extreme!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Enayet for this lovely review and kind visit. All appreciated...:).....................

[Sarah]

This is beautiful as ever Sami!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You have summed up your experience marvelously. Thank you so much for all. Take care...:)............

[Cryingkate]

Yes the Great Love with Spirit....
The Temple no man can destroy.
The Dogon People of whom are descendants of the Egyptian priests and of those who still carry out knowledge passed down from the Priests say man actually have 360 senses.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. What a wonderful review and insights dear poet. You have graced me with all your wonder. Take care...God bless...:)...........