Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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Great! Just phenomenal! May i ask if you could review my writing- content extreme!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Enayet for this lovely review and kind visit. All appreciated...:)............. read more
This is beautiful as ever Sami!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed up your experience marvelously. Thank you so much for all. Take care...:)........ read more
Yes the Great Love with Spirit....
The Temple no man can destroy.
The Dogon People of whom are descendants of the Egyptian priests and of those who still carry out knowledge passed down from the Priests say man actually have 360 senses.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. What a wonderful review and insights dear poet. You have graced me with all your wonder. Take c.. read more
I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
much depth to every word in this poem...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for all you say and do. Please send some read requests when you pis.. read more
cycy

3 Years Ago

you are very welcome Sami...will do :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)....................
and equally, the fine impressionist paintings accompanying!



Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you dear poet for this lovely review and kind visit. I,m.honored...:).....
Faten Gh

3 Years Ago

Wow ! i love this poem ! amazing
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Thank you kindly...:)........
It is a good thing to "read" another and to be read in return. It is as blissful to be understood as it is the fire of hell to be misunderstood... I wonder how often we think we are aware when we are in our own reality and not experience the true reality of the other?
Here I feel you are in time and on key with your lover and with the reader.
I enjoyed the read Sami.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So blessed to see you dear poet and friend. I was heartbroken when you closed your account but .. read more
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sami.
You give me hope and you have my eyes stinging with happy tears for your kind .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. It will all work out. Keep up your good spirit and caring. God bless...:).......
I could sense the yearning behind this bittersweet write. A beautiful tribute to a past love.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for the lovely review and visit. I'm pleased you like it...:)........ read more
This was a beautiful poem and the pictures were great as well. Very meaningful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Again, thank you so much for the lovely review and kind visit. I look forward to reading your p.. read more
I was directed to you by Sophy's beautiful tribute to you and six other great writers that I had already seen. I have no idea how I missed your work, it is so beautiful! You are clearly a wonderful romance writer and I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for the world!

Long before the winnowing
Of the wind across soul-scented
Barns and old plowed fields…

These lines were exquisite, as were the rest, but they called out to me. Soul-scented barns... what a magically beautiful phrase.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you Ashira for this amazing review and kind words. So glad to see you visit. And many tha.. read more
I love the paintings as well as the poem. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Olive for this lovely review and kind visit. All appreciated...:).............. read more
Aprille

3 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)....................

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