Macabre

Macabre

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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The inner dark side of us. An autumn psychological write...He can refer to our psyche..

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Macabre/…….By Sami Khalil

A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

The Poem:



He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.


I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life.


 Easily broken clouds addressed the self-doubt of insomnia, for my goodness, you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births.


A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins.


Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? 


Those willed to shadow sleep are the phenomenon!




© 2014 Sami Khalil



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He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

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3 Years Ago

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Artwork and words. Amazing. I missed this one. You held me to the last words and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

Wow. Thank you great poet for this wonderful review and lovely visit. So glad you like it...:)........ read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

I was to find this one and you are welcome my friend.
a poem that paints real human being.
The poem is written in interest binding way.
The way you have written how our insecurities arises and how it effects on our relations, how those insecurities give ourselves and others pain, what we do because of those insecurities and what a death sounds of us is very amazing.

Thanks for sharing with us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. You are a brilliant reader and writer. Thank you so much for taking the time and effort... Plea.. read more
irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating me. You are welcome. Yeah sure I will send you some read requests. :)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

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Sami...wow...leave it to you to make darkness poetically eloquent. insecurity, jealousy, rage, the ability to be cruel is there, in all of us. At any given point we have to make the choice...let darkness over come, or reach for the light of love and be humane. Brilliant execution, sir!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated beloved poet. I love your take on this poem for it affects all hum.. read more
A Master of the Light has no problem probing light's lack.
Who better to show us that only fear can long live there?
When, with his exquisite words, he draws out the wriggling black thing and shows it to us, we are unsettled to the core.
At such a time, the comfort of that taken-for-granted light seems pretty damn inviting.
Thanks, Sami, for literally scaring the hell out of us!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much too beloved poet for this amazing review and appreciation. You are appreciate.. read more
Wow! powerful so much I think you control the heavens with this write! And so with time I will be enslaved to these writes of yours in the dark corridors of time. Great work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thankyou so much beloved poet for this amazing review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:.. read more
I'm no poet but I love your lyrics, I can only image writing something as wonderful as this. the phrasing, you are who I want to be...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. What a humbling honor indeed. So grateful for all. Be blessed...:).....
Dark thoughts... Death...
This is last achievement.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this unique review and appreciation. Grazie mille...:).....
It took some time for me to grasp the message you were trying to send out (yes I am that stupid). But when it dawned upon me I was in awe. Great Job cant wait to see your other works.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this amazing review and appreciation. Please send some read .. read more
Portraying the negative side so well. A spot on from the perspective of darkness itself.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are positively a.. read more

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