Macabre

Macabre

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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The inner dark side of us. An autumn psychological write...He can refer to our psyche..

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Macabre/…….By Sami Khalil

A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

The Poem:



He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.


I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life.


 Easily broken clouds addressed the self-doubt of insomnia, for my goodness, you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births.


A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins.


Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? 


Those willed to shadow sleep are the phenomenon!




© 2014 Sami Khalil



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He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

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Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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Reviews

Deep and profound. One could never see how dark that other side of man is when insecurity speaks...
Thank you for sharing this piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have nailed it on the head. Insecurity can be dark and frightening. Thank you kindly for sh.. read more
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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I love this write Sami! It's fantastically wonderful! Very dark! This is my kind of poem. I love the word Macabre. The term came up in my Music History class and I was the only one who knew what it meant. That's the perks of being a horror writer I suppose. Anyway, great write Sami! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow Cody. So thankful for you and your wonderful feedback. You are indeed a Poe's Poe of macabre sto.. read more
Wow! Such a strength to your creative lines causing imagery to grip the reader, excellent pen upon this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Eric for all you say and do. Keep your golden pen sharp and inspirational...T.. read more
Eric Cox

3 Years Ago

You're welcome my friend who also commands a golden pen I'd say. :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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It perfectly depicts every emotion in our dark side. 'Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? " This is so true.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. I'm thankful...:)........ read more
M

3 Years Ago

Me too I am really grateful for yr sharings :)
wow, the words here speaks volumes and the interperate perfectly the subject and the title, bravo Sami...:)






Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Latifa for all you say and do. It is always an honor when you visit...:)....... read more
"you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births"

What imagery... this is just good writing, nothing else... Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this amazing review and kind sharing. You are apprec.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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I like literature that is dark and grotesque. And yours is a masterpiece among them. I could feel the suffovation and sadness. Salute.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. I salute you too dear Penny for this wonderful review and kind appreciation. You are appreciate.. read more
Wow! I am so used to your calming spiritual writes that this took me by complete and utter surprise. Who knew Sami had a dark side in him?! This was really well written. A clever observation of the darkness that hides within all of us. Great work sir!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated dear beloved poet. So thrilled you like the dark genre. I guess Ha.. read more

I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life

Thats dark and deep for sure im inspired by your writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this awesome review and kind words. You are appreciated...:)..... read more
You are a talented poet.
The superb piece engaged me for some time and will charm me for ever.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet and dear friend for this awesome review and kind words. You are .. read more

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