Macabre

Macabre

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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The inner dark side of us. An autumn psychological write...He can refer to our psyche..

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Macabre/…….By Sami Khalil

A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

The Poem:



He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.


I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life.


 Easily broken clouds addressed the self-doubt of insomnia, for my goodness, you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births.


A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins.


Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? 


Those willed to shadow sleep are the phenomenon!




© 2014 Sami Khalil



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He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

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Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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Reviews

Scary images come to mind with your graphic pictures combined
Egos can get carried away on the negative waves of life.
Brilliant insight in the dark side of life.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. So glad you like it. Take.. read more
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing! :) You are Welcome.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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B.J
Each stanza is gripping and holds your attention. I can only say well done as others have said.

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Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Barb for all. I appreciate you...:)................
B.J

3 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)...
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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As the others have already wrote, nicely done. The danse macabre ever has a different perspective.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Jon for the wonderful review and kind visit. Have a great one...:)............. read more
A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins........i need not to say...it was amazing like rest others... introspective, profound......great work....:))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Anne for this wonderful review and kind appreciation. You are appreciated too.. read more
A sordid and fabulous piece that really soothes the horror child that resides in my brain!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So good to see you dear Thomas. It has been a while indeed. Hope things are good with you. Graz.. read more
I enjoyed this write very much Sami, you captured the cunning ways of the deepest darkest parts of the human species that we all inevitably have. Whether we'd like to admit to it or not. The good and evil lie within us, sometimes slipping towards the dark side, but its important to remember the power of will.
Thank you for this piece :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated dear Nebunova. So glad youhave visited and shared your wonderful t.. read more
A very interesting introspective write, well done Sami.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you Noel for this lovely review and kind words. I appreciate it all...:)...........
Nebunova

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome (:
He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

:)…………………………..
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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Having the benefit of the others' reviews, I definitely agree that we don't have to look in the mirror to see our dark, macabre side these days; we only have to watch the news. But I digress. This is an intelligent, artfully worded, unique take on the subject. Brilliant, and the art adds a great touch.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. What a wonderful review from a wonderful poet and friend. So thankful for the care and apprecia.. read more
Wow! Deep and dark.
A chilling read!
Absolutely amazing.
I loved it!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Pushkar for this wonderful review and kind visit. I appreciate you...:)........ read more

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