Perfect Solitude

Perfect Solitude

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Lyrics to a song to be sung...

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            Perfect Solitude
                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you
Even if you're uncomfortable
To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax
Take a deep breath
Mind you this imprisonment
We are being glued.

Would you happen to know
Or have you overlooked
The backgrounds we share
The velvet thoughts
The adverts fading away
Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace
Of brighter mornings
Of mislabeled nights
I want to remake songs
Where everything is
Merely a cover
A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love
Keeping it low key
Where every prelude 
Is a quiet rendition 
To these two hearts
In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude... 










© 2016 Sami Khalil



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I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Your perfect solitude is so tempting, and your invitation is irresistible !

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

Irritable or irresistible. Check your meaning. Irritable is negative.
Mrudula Rani

2 Weeks Ago

Sorry, my IPad has two languages and some times what words it pops up I am not sure. I should be mor.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

:)................
I feel this more to be a chorale, a prayer song with all the voieces, hands and hearts pleading to God, to the Lady of grace, Virigin Mary, I feel peace and tranquility spreading through Your words.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

My goodness. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kindness. You are appreci.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

You are welcome my friend :)
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

::::::)))))))))
Very beautiful poem Sami. When it comes to solitude I can relate to what you say. I am up each morning before Before Four. so that I can have three or four hours by myself. Most get loneliness mixed up with aloneness, but there is a difference. I really enjoyed your lyrics, my friend....peter

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

I truly agree and i Love your separation between the two. One is needed and refreshing in a positive.. read more
Solitude is a place of bliss in this life filled with noise,lovely write;-]

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

So true and well articulated. Lovey visit. Thank you so much.
Sometimes I do need to be alone. People don't understand it, they call me funny acting, oh well, i'll be that.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

All understandable. Thank you dear poet for this lovely visit.
Beautiful lyrics, Sami. Love is felt and shared bringing us to that place of perfect solitude. Favorited.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

So true and well articulated. I do agree. Thank you so much Traci for all.
I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude...

:) i can see the person sing this song ..nice lyrics..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Cor, how wonderful was that eh? A perfect blend comprised of equal parts mind, body & spirit. I have been away far too long old friend...All Good Things, N

Posted 4 Months Ago


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If I could travel in time, I would like to let my younger self know that love can be felt most perfectly only in solitude...silence beautifies and intensifies the feelings of the heart...In solitude, we find peace, and only in peace can we search for love...
A marvellous write as always, dear sir!

The lines--
"Lady of grace
Of brighter mornings
Of mislabeled nights," are truly beautiful...I enjoy how aesthetically pleasing the whole piece looks, with the charcoal painting... kudos! :))



Posted 7 Months Ago


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ahhhh... Sami you have really turned into one special writer.. with every poem i read I am becoming more of a fan of your's all over again..

you can feel the passion in your craft, every word painstakingly picked, the format, the graphics, all in unison with each other..

very fine work here my friend.. looking forward to reading more as time goes by..



Posted 7 Months Ago


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