Perfect Solitude

Perfect Solitude

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Lyrics to a song to be sung...

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            Perfect Solitude
                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you
Even if you're uncomfortable
To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax
Take a deep breath
Mind you this imprisonment
We are being glued.

Would you happen to know
Or have you overlooked
The backgrounds we share
The velvet thoughts
The adverts fading away
Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace
Of brighter mornings
Of mislabeled nights
I want to remake songs
Where everything is
Merely a cover
A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love
Keeping it low key
Where every prelude 
Is a quiet rendition 
To these two hearts
In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude... 


© 2016 Sami Khalil


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I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A thing you cant buy! A precious thing that's so rare..yet appreciated by those who enjoy it. Enchanting it can be and envigorating. Thank you!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you so much Kitty for all. God bless...
kitty

5 Years Ago

Blessings to you too. We can be inspired - in solitude.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

:)............
Solitude is one aspect of life and state of mind I've learnt to appreciate aver the years.
Being able to relax, meditate and reflect in silence away from the madding crowd is a good discipline we should all exercise in our life, as part of our soul-search and being in touch with our inner and deeper self; that way we'll gain insight and earn the patience skill to also be able to appreciate and deeply getting to know others.

WELL DONE!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

I totally agree BalckPrince. So true and well said. Thank you so much. God bless.
Your perfect solitude is so tempting, and your invitation is irresistible !

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Irritable or irresistible. Check your meaning. Irritable is negative.
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Sorry, my IPad has two languages and some times what words it pops up I am not sure. I should be mor.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

:)................
I feel this more to be a chorale, a prayer song with all the voieces, hands and hearts pleading to God, to the Lady of grace, Virigin Mary, I feel peace and tranquility spreading through Your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My goodness. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kindness. You are appreci.. read more
lightsong

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

::::::)))))))))
Very beautiful poem Sami. When it comes to solitude I can relate to what you say. I am up each morning before Before Four. so that I can have three or four hours by myself. Most get loneliness mixed up with aloneness, but there is a difference. I really enjoyed your lyrics, my friend....peter

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

I truly agree and i Love your separation between the two. One is needed and refreshing in a positive.. read more
Solitude is a place of bliss in this life filled with noise,lovely write;-]

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

So true and well articulated. Lovey visit. Thank you so much.
Sometimes I do need to be alone. People don't understand it, they call me funny acting, oh well, i'll be that.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

All understandable. Thank you dear poet for this lovely visit.
Beautiful lyrics, Sami. Love is felt and shared bringing us to that place of perfect solitude. Favorited.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

So true and well articulated. I do agree. Thank you so much Traci for all.
I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude...

:) i can see the person sing this song ..nice lyrics..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cor, how wonderful was that eh? A perfect blend comprised of equal parts mind, body & spirit. I have been away far too long old friend...All Good Things, N

Posted 6 Years Ago


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