Sage And Saga

Sage And Saga

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...

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Sage And Saga/By Sami Khalil



Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...In the mood for the classics



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Declareth I, declareth to thee manifest love
With runnels of gentle sweat running forth
And countenance of our meandering grace
Pouring of honeyed words,proving a worth.

This whip-lashed susurration never abates
Vividly dreams becometh a master witness
The panoply of resilience and florid enigma
Unsoiling the sunsets of life and its fitness.

Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity
Thine beauty filleth mine tremulous heart
By pervading affection, thine own vivacity.

Declareth I whilst surreal skies may conjure
Days ahead when weary would fain treasure.


© 2016 Sami Khalil



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"This whip-lashed susurration never abates"...damn Sami, forgive my expressiveness but wow...that line got me and shall linger a while :) A brilliant masterpiece dear friend, truly, exceptional :)

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Hello, Sami! :)
This is an interesting use of language. I'll have to google a bit to figure out what you've said here. Haha
It seems loving.

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the "panoply of resilience and florid enigma" this is my favorite line in your poem, both for its uniqueness as well as the way it feels as I read... while I have never been a fan of the these and thous or the doths and sucheths... this poem is both well written and superb Sami... thanks for sharing it..

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Captivating...romance was an art...sigh... Whisked me away with this Sami. Gorgeous poetry. R xo

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I feel envy, because English is not my native language. How elegant you play with words here in this piece.

This breathes classic romance, back in the days when men had to try harder to win a woman's heart.

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Love the old world feel of this one, romance was so grand in those times.
Swoon worthy, Sami.

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this is beautiful. i love it. keep up the beautiful work

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My love is like a red, red rose
That’s newly sprung in June :
My love is like the melody
That’s sweetly played in tune.

Yes indeed Sami, shades of auld Lang syne throughout this enchanting old worldly penned poem, sure to melt any fair maidens heart...A classic !




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As always Sami so well written with the grace and poise of a fine craftsman. I see fair maidens and princesses knocking on your castle door for your autograph.

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love the language ..such a treat to read .. i just read jacob's "still on the leash of madness" and sure am enjoying the lift your classic gives me ..politics crumbling all around but love still endures eh!? again great language sir .. sets me own ol' heart to soaring :)
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