Redamancy

Redamancy

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance and beauty

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Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil
Romance and beauty
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Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines, 
memorizing the edges of 
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,
ricocheting noticeably backwards,
needing inked notes and helpless blankets.
I pretended to be the eclipse between 
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return.
Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...



© 2017 Sami Khalil



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"Redamancy"
sami Khalil,
"I read your curved lines
memorizing the edges of
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes
upon the starlight."
The night sky is so mind boggling
that I thought this poem has
got to be in reference to it.
But then;
"I pretended to be the eclipse between
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return."
The moon and stars feel like love.
It's easy to fall in love with such win-
some charm. Requited and returned
to your heart.
Blessings,
Kathy



Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Wow! What a lovely review dear poet and friend. So glad you you like it. All rich blessings.
Kathy Van Kurin

2 Months Ago

I wish the same for you Sami thanks for your kindness as well.
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

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Hi Sami. I've not been reading much lately so took a look at a few read requests. Wow. Your writing is always inspirational. Such a use of fine words. I really loved this.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wow! Thank you so much Mad EnglishMan for this magical review and kind appreciation. So glad you lik.. read more
wow i lost the words nice flow of emotions
great peace i love it

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

Wow! Thank you so much for the kind visit and liking. All appreciated.
So enjoyed reading this piece, I just had to do it, again.
Wonderful, Sami!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and kindness. Many blessings.
I love this poem. thanks for this wonderful poetry.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

Thank you kindly for sharing with us your wonderful visit and summation.
wow! well done sir! i love your opening 2 lines and following next three ..there is science, spiritualism and such beauty in them ..and the rest tells such a large story ..with aplomb ..this is one for the books says i! so good!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Outstanding! Clear as a bell...what our minds can achieve, what are emotions can stand, and how are feelings can be so swayed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Yes indeed Sami, when we observe the night time sky on a clear evening, those vibrant and many magnificent shiny stars fill our minds with wonderment and awe, reminding us, we too are part of the almighty kernel of creation, mesmerising poetry my friend!

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Between the two realities: throne we want to be and the one that really is. Love this from the first line to the last.

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I am crying this is so beautiful so lovely I love this poem...

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