Redamancy

Redamancy

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance and beauty

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Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil
Romance and beauty
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Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines, 
memorizing the edges of 
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,
ricocheting noticeably backwards,
needing inked notes and helpless blankets.
I pretended to be the eclipse between 
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return.
Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...



© 2017 Sami Khalil



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// Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines,
memorizing the edges of
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.//
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an epitaph of poetic beauty!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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mou
words are so sweet and needless to say your write is wonderful...long after at wc and your page too :)


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Beautifully done....enjoyed :) x

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dam son i about threw my panties at the screen hahhaaha!

well, boxers anyway haha

that's some damn sexy writing my friend..

in your smart and elegant way..

Well Done!


Posted 6 Months Ago


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Redamacy? Well, whatever that is, I am glad it was saved, and I am relieved that she lost herself too.
Your poem stirs the imagination wonderfully!

Posted 6 Months Ago


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' Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and ~ messages I received. ~ Upon the cloud linings... '

Desire, true love, can only be seen when you know it's there, waiting... perhaps upon the cloud linings, or, in a grey corner waiting for the sun to reach it. You make love with unselfish words, you express your gift so beautifully, Sami.. you always do.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Your words gave me goose bumps, Sami! lol Into my fave it goes ...

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Awesome poem . Like the romantic imagery in this alot. Overall a very impressive piece.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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This is writer's romance... You pen with such a tender hand and intricate understanding of wordplay, truly a writer's writer.

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dear Sami... loving in return... reminds me of "Man of La Mancha"... to every man his Dulcinea... to every woman
her Don Quixote... Sami, your poetry
is serenely beautiful. truly, Pat

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