Redamancy

Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil

Romance and beauty

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Upon the lunar light,

I read your curved lines, 

memorizing the edges of 

beautiful shadows and

concealed paradoxes.

Upon the star light,

I payed attention to the center,

hiding in lovely masks,

donating my organs of selfless

withering to the bleeding fantasies,

releasing emotions upon the fray

of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,

ricocheting noticeably backwards,

needing inked notes and helpless blankets.

I pretended to be the eclipse between 

the two realities, allowing redamancy

to be saved by losing herself in return.

Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 

messages I received.

Upon the cloud linings...

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Between the two realities: throne we want to be and the one that really is. Love this from the first line to the last.

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

I am crying this is so beautiful so lovely I love this poem...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah to look on as others crumble with sadness, and memories replace the physical, well done, good read.

[Red Raven]

-of memories over hallowed ashes.
wow!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your work, so exalted; causing almost everything else to seem "deviant and peculiar, ricocheting noticeably backwards" by comparison.
Exceptional poetry, Mr. K!

[ms. barrie]

// Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines,
memorizing the edges of
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.//
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an epitaph of poetic beauty!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. What a marvelous review from a wondrous poetess of excellence. I can't say how much you inspire your fans and readers...:)....................

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome...and i whole-hardheartedly thank you for your lovely words & your benevolent presence on this community. keep shining...i look forward to meandering around your poetic garden again. namaste :)

[Sami Khalil]

:::::::)))))))......

[mou]

words are so sweet and needless to say your write is wonderful...long after at wc and your page too :)

[Enchanted-Raven]

Beautifully done....enjoyed :) x

[Antonio Valentino]

dam son i about threw my panties at the screen hahhaaha!

well, boxers anyway haha

that's some damn sexy writing my friend..

in your smart and elegant way..

Well Done!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Redamacy? Well, whatever that is, I am glad it was saved, and I am relieved that she lost herself too.
Your poem stirs the imagination wonderfully!