Redamancy

Redamancy

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance and beauty

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Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil
Romance and beauty
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Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines, 
memorizing the edges of 
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,
ricocheting noticeably backwards,
needing inked notes and helpless blankets.
I pretended to be the eclipse between 
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return.
Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...

© 2017 Sami Khalil


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' Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and ~ messages I received. ~ Upon the cloud linings... '

Desire, true love, can only be seen when you know it's there, waiting... perhaps upon the cloud linings, or, in a grey corner waiting for the sun to reach it. You make love with unselfish words, you express your gift so beautifully, Sami.. you always do.

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Your words gave me goose bumps, Sami! lol Into my fave it goes ...

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Awesome poem . Like the romantic imagery in this alot. Overall a very impressive piece.

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This is writer's romance... You pen with such a tender hand and intricate understanding of wordplay, truly a writer's writer.

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dear Sami... loving in return... reminds me of "Man of La Mancha"... to every man his Dulcinea... to every woman
her Don Quixote... Sami, your poetry
is serenely beautiful. truly, Pat

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Exquisite as always! Now I'll have that word on my brain all day. Seriously, I love that last stanza because when we love and give of ourselves, we not only are saved but enhanced. I'm so pleased and privileged to read such a lovely poem.

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absolutely beautiful!
Thank you for sharing Sami :)!

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Another brilliant piece of romantic musing, Sami.

To take a step back from a jaded love and view it in a new light, to witness the beloved again from this obtuse angle, and realise that all that stirred deep love and longing in the heart still remains right in front of you; it was just that you had forgotten what it was and that it was still there through the fog of passing time. And the epiphany leads to truer love and bliss.

As always, brilliantly penned. Delicate, free flowing and dipped in the fountain of Romantic love. Excellent work.

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Your words always flow so easily, and clear!

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A journey of romance it is! said the King. Fine writing Sir Sami, eloquently said, with the flow and the imagery I was just riding on smooth jazz notes!

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