Redamancy

Redamancy

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance and beauty

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Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil
Romance and beauty
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Upon the lunar light,
I read your curved lines, 
memorizing the edges of 
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes.
Upon the star light,
I payed attention to the center,
hiding in lovely masks,
donating my organs of selfless
withering to the bleeding fantasies,
releasing emotions upon the fray
of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,
ricocheting noticeably backwards,
needing inked notes and helpless blankets.
I pretended to be the eclipse between 
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return.
Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...



© 2017 Sami Khalil



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An intrigue view of romance the poet trying to portrait, love and romance can have peripheral and deeper voyage of it's own, also it can be deceiving to normal viewers but in core very genuine, a different way of looking at love and romance

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Wonderful read as always!!

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Lovely. Your poems are just amazing.
I love this line :Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...

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Oh how lovely Sami
Romance and love its so enchanting your view of her
and how this brings on such a light feeling to the heart and mind

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I remember something that asking myself, how many times we lose ourselves to earned what love can bring? Despite that, its worth every losing piece of yourself to that very person. Well done on another fine piece, my good brother, i hope your well...

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Your pen is mighty Sami. The true essence of offering in romance is portrayed here with such amazing insight, absolutely delightful :)

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Wow. I'm so honored you have visited and so grateful for all you say and do. All rich blessings...:).. read more
This is just out of world! To be able to ink such a beautiful work upon the cloud lining is simply unimaginable to me.
It is blissful to be reading this amazing craft. Thank you for sharing, Sir..

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Your continued fine use of romantic language is nothing short of superb Sami. An excellent write in so many ways.

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Romantic to the nth degree, Sami. Each time you see your love, she is just a bit different from the last time and you see something new to cherish. Stunning work! Lydi**

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Simply breathtaking and so beautifully written. I love how you made references to celestial entities adding to the romance and love that shines behind each and every line. Such great talent you have added to the heart of a true poet. I am in awe......

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