Forgivess

Forgivess

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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When letting go...

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Forgiveness....................By Sami Khalil
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When thinking of letting go:
Forgiveness come to mind,
over engraved dates,
or planted roses 
that sway in pounding hearts,
even with stabbing thorns.
It has no drafted metaphor,
no hanging confinement,
in dawn's eyes,
no damnation of hollow
faces in moral outrage.
Speaking of letting go:
Eclipses take place,
over spinning cycles.
Circling hawks will
seem so distant,
in festering fear;
that spirit animal.
History is clothed 
in borrowing shadows,
privileged to the victor.
So, write your narrative,
fitting for good intentions,
in silent goodbyes.
Leave all in the dust bin of loss,
meant to free all along.
When contemplating forgiveness:
Speak of buried swords! 


© 2018 Sami Khalil



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Forgiveness is a powerful thing and speaks volumes about the forgiver. Forgiveness has changed the moodings in many hostile situations. A 9 letter word called forgiveness. Another one of your fine pieces as usual my friend. Keep writing and inspiring.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Wow! so true and well articulated dear poet. Thank you so much for all you say and do. God bless...
kelvin

1 Month Ago

You're welcome. You know the saying the truth hurts it also can be healing
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

All true..............
Nice poem Sami. Forgiveness is always the sweetest thing, and is good for both sides. I enjoyed your poem, my friend....Peter

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! So true and well said Mr. Peter. I would like to thank you for sharing and visiting.
peter Duggan

3 Months Ago

You are welcome, my friend....Peter
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

:).................
Thinking of letting go, forgiveness comes to mind....amazing creation..keep writing

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! Thank you so much dear poet for your visit and grateful review. All appreciated.
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forgiveness is a blessing for a true heart and probably a regret to that one who had done a lots of damage..yes true after all these back and forth, it is the most wonderful thing that should be done..probably find my crossed journey in your write..beautiful and thanks for sharing your write with us

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! I love your thoughts on this poem. So true and needed. Thank you so much dear poet for your vis.. read more
dear Sami... to forgive is divine... I believe in the power of good and am blessed with forgiveness. truly, Pat

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! It is tough to do but doable. At least for our own sake and to do the Will of The Almighty. Tha.. read more
I love this poem! your choice of words are spot on and mesmerizing. It certainly took forgiveness to a new level! Thanks for sharing. Best Wishes!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! Thank you so much Mr. John for taking the time and effort. Glad to see you.
not an easy thing for us humans is it!? we say we forgive but the offence remains in our memory .... even when the emotional attachment has dissipated .. we still remember the occurrence ... funny how the forgiveness we apply heals us more than another ..in fact the letting go will free that offense from our lives without the perp ever knowing it ... they may be dead and gone ... or in jail .. or we have no opportunity to make contact ... but still that letting go will heal us ;) especially like the solemnity of your last two line ...good stuff Sami!
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow! You are telling the truth and it is marvelous. Forgiveness is very healing and very liberating... read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

oh yes...may God bless us all Sami!
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

:)................
I always say that the hardest is not to forgive someone, but to forgive Your own self, in Your poem I saw two things, first a drama I watched few years ago under the same name (Forgiveness), the amount of inner human emotions in this drama is very deep, very dense, it speaks of two lovers whom got married, the wife cheated on her husband, though he did forgive her, but she couldn't forgive her own self, and they got the divorce, the second thing, I see something beyond, something of Wars and how the fighting groups can or can't have forgiveness to each others, I feel a raging tune through Your words that actually wants... needs to convey its message.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

I love it...
Light

3 Months Ago

I'm glad You do :)
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

:)......................
If only the world would bury its swords....if only. Too often damnation is in the heart instead of forgiveness. Another good one, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

So true and well articulated. It is hard indeed and takes a lot of steps to reach that point. Forgiv.. read more

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