Ragdoll

Ragdoll

A Poem by SammMG
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Sometimes we just want to feel more

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I feel lifeless
Like a ragdoll
Cast off the edge
Falling down
Rebounding in flight
Every hit is numb
Is it wrong?
To long for a heart
Is it bad?
To want the pain
So I can get prepared
Before the bottom comes

© 2015 SammMG



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I can relate very well to this...maybe a little too well..

Posted 2 Years Ago


SammMG

2 Years Ago

Have no fear, you're simply one of many.
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613
The ending is so sad; at one point, I could have related to this. Very nice job!

- Brittney

Posted 2 Years Ago


613

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!

If you would be so kind as to check out my completed manuscript, HIM,.. read more
SammMG

2 Years Ago

Yes, I had saw the Read Request you sent me,, plus it was on your profile. I just haven't had the ti.. read more
613

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
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Oh Samm, this is not the time to feel lifeless, you are in the most energy-blasting-container right now :D
It is good to want more, to change from a ragdoll into something beaming with exquisite feelings (but with the good ones, bad feelings show up too -- so be careful what you wish for :D)

Posted 2 Years Ago


SammMG

2 Years Ago

Well the main point of this is the want to feel more. Thank you for the review! :)

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SammMG
SammMG

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