Ragdoll

Sometimes we just want to feel more

I feel lifeless

Like a ragdoll

Cast off the edge

Falling down

Rebounding in flight

Every hit is numb

Is it wrong?

To long for a heart

Is it bad?

To want the pain

So I can get prepared

Before the bottom comes

Reviews

[ThisIsBatman]

I can relate very well to this...maybe a little too well..

[SammMG]

Have no fear, you're simply one of many.

[613]

The ending is so sad; at one point, I could have related to this. Very nice job!

- Brittney

[SammMG]

I think there are points in all of our lives, where we've felt like this. Thank you!

[613]

You're welcome!

If you would be so kind as to check out my completed manuscript, HIM, I'd truly appreciate it. I am planning to have it published but want the kinks fixed first. (Can't move forward without help from others!) Haha.

[SammMG]

Yes, I had saw the Read Request you sent me,, plus it was on your profile. I just haven't had the time today to look at the first chapter (Since I'm at school) but the moment I have a chance I'll give it a look over.

[613]

Thank you!

[~]

Oh Samm, this is not the time to feel lifeless, you are in the most energy-blasting-container right now :D
It is good to want more, to change from a ragdoll into something beaming with exquisite feelings (but with the good ones, bad feelings show up too -- so be careful what you wish for :D)

[SammMG]

Well the main point of this is the want to feel more. Thank you for the review! :)