Forever, Violette

Forever, Violette

A Book by Samantha Grace
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How much can you handle? Violette has had enough in her seventeen years to last until her end of days. Her dad, the one person she always counted on, is now dead. Just like that. Her mother, what mother? She�s too busy thinking of herself to acknowle

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© 2009 Samantha Grace


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Samantha Grace
Just a draft, critique please

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Very good, I like your writing style. This isn't really something that I would normally be interested in, but it held my attention long enough for me to finish it. From the first sentence, you gave the reader a pretty clear picture of Violette's outlook on life and how her mind works.
There were a few grammar problems and I don't necessarily agree with some of your punctuation, but that's just about all I found wrong with it. Keep going, I like where this story's headed. Good luck! =)

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Samantha Grace
Samantha Grace

Simpsonville, SC



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I'm Samantha. I'm 18. I don't remember not writing or reading. I have a little boy born 9/13/2007 [Shawn]. He is my heart, my life, my everything. I'm engaged to his dad [Dustin]. I also love art, mus.. more..

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