Friend are God Gift

Your disliking I still keep safe in my mind

That time of moment I still remain in life

I forget the reason why you dislike my luck

Since that day I still trying to read your mind

In real the same day I read your minds

I feel necessary to hide the reason from your eyes

It's necessary to hide from the your eyes

I didn't  want to, as you so egoist in life

Mistake can  happen either any side

I was so friendly also that time

I also still less egoist human in this life

This is the reason still we are friend nice

I can run far away at that time

Your company stopped me at that time

I maintain still my niceness in this life

Friends can never build in every time

                    Friend are God Gift Remember, every time                     Good  friends are hard to come by.

Reviews

[Beautiful Intentions]

To me true friends are the ones that stick by your side through thick and thin, the good times and the bad times, the moments when you can meet their gaze and even during the moments when you cannot. To find a good friend, a friend who stands by your side always, is a testament of true unconditional love. They are a blessing to never be taken for granted. It sounds to me as if you have recognized this in someone, and for that have learned to count your blessings despite whatever has transpired within the friendship. It sounds to me as if someone is very lucky to have you in their life as well.:)

[Kathrin S]

I like the length of your poem, and the theme. It's very true that good friends are hard to come by!

The grammar does need some work as someone already pointed out, but I think you have very good ideas!

[Flutterby aish]

Your intention is great as is the idea behind the poem. The grammar needs a lot of work though. But you are at a great place. keep writing, keep learning, that's how you go on improving!

[Yurvee]

It was pleasure reading. Keep going?!

[kavya]

Friends are not God's gift..........friends are fake!!!!..........now_a_days fake online friends

[creative Marie]

I disagree, if you view friends as fakes, you may never have known friends who were honest and faithful, (Please forgive me if that sounded upsetting I'm not trying to judge).

though friends alone may not be God's gift, Love defiantly is, and if we see the world with love and compassion and understanding we will start to meet people who are equally so.

So have love, have confidence, and be faithful to the friends you already know 'cause they may view you as a true friend even if that's not how you see them.

[Ayushi Sharma]

U have defined a true friend in a beautiful way...every line is amazing..

[It's Me, The Miracle]

good... Nevertheless, U need to improve and its a platform that offers a lot of chance to improve. Use it

[Ayushi Beura]

Friendship is something which can never be expressed in words but you did it...well done

[Arjoyita Roy]

Some are eternal some are ephemeral, but friendship is a bliss. Keep it up ☺

[Ellen Kolman]

Nice poem Sam! Good job! thank you for sharing with me