feeling you in mind

feeling you in mind

A Poem by samparks,sam

The feeling of the mind, around every side
Life is a struggle, need patience Every time
God listens, everyone, sure every time 
Do in life Act real, every time in your life 
Celebrate your life day by day by the  Act every time
This is the reality of the every human in his life
Defeat is not final, until to try is not stopping in life
Be Happy every time in your life keep it mind every time
Your Future you can create by the present act in your life

© 2016 samparks,sam

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Nice writing! I can tell that you write with a lot of feelings. That's great my friend!

Posted 4 Months Ago

Something everyone can relate to! Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Samparks sam,
"Defeat is not final." We must not give up! Life is a process and your poem gives much encouragement. Thank you so much! Blessings kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago

i liked this part:Your Future you can create by the present act in your life. it's something that always we ignore.well done

Posted 1 Year Ago

Enjoyed reading your poem. "Life is a struggle and patience is needed. Defeat is not final..God does listen. Very insightful poem. Well written and expressed.Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago

It is a motivational poetry...very nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on November 26, 2016
Last Updated on November 26, 2016



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